http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zbSbRu9wI5M
There are some things that I am proud of in this animation, for example my ‘trademark’ character drawing which consists of a detailed head and stick legs and arms. It was my intention to make the character have a detailed face with the correct proportions but to make the head large compared to the rest of the body. I thought that this would make the characters more comical and appeal to the audience.
However, there are a number of things I feel that I could have added to this animation or improved on. For example overall, I could have improved on the easing in and out of character walk and run cycles as I think some of them were of poor quality which may have lost me some marks.
I feel I could have added in more objects in the second scene where the cop is chasing the robber in front of a rolling background to make it a little bit more interesting. For example I could have added a seagull flying overhead and the disappearing of the edge of the screen.
The end scene could have been improved slightly because it was my intention to have the camera look like it was really focussed on the robber. When the robber hit the lamppost abruptly the camera would then continue on as if it wasn’t prepared to stop suddenly when the robber did. Unfortunately this didn’t turn out as I had envisioned. I could have spent more time tweaking with the timing of these actions to make it seem more real.
The part where the robber fell after hitting the lamppost could have also been improved. I tried to make the legs crumble first as to avoid just making the character fall at an angle without bending. This again didn’t produce the intended result as the action went at a slower pace than I expected.
However overall, despite its problems, I am quite proud of my animation and think that it is one of my best works so far in university.